Unacceptable as released. It doesn’t easily flow and the Bible readings are links, not the text. You’re better off using an app or the actual books.

Might I suggest sample pages so we can see the nature of the commentary?

Ironically, the authors have cultural blinders of their own when it comes to (mis)interpreting other denominations to use as analogies when trying to point out an equivalent misunderstanding from ancient times. That was off-putting.